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Field Guide:

How to Write a Cold Email

A no-fluff playbook for outbound sequence strategy, cold email structure, copy styles, and follow-up frameworks.

Introduction

A straight-to-the-point guide on mastering outbound sales development.

Welcome to the no-fluff, straight-to-the-point guide on mastering outbound sales development.

Look, there’s a sea of advice, some good, some bad, and some downright confusing.

This guide cuts through the noise to bring you practical strategies and tactics.

Introduction

What you’ll get.

As you flip through these pages, you won’t find vague generalizations.

Instead, you’ll get down to the nuts and bolts of outreach styles, from high-volume blitzes to strategic account-based plays.

You’ll get the low-down on writing email copy that doesn’t just land in an inbox but also provokes a click, a read, and a reply.

Introduction

Set a new standard.

Whether you’re a battle-hardened SDR looking for an edge or a sales leader determined to elevate your entire team, you have the right playbook.

So, forget what you think you know about outbound sales, and let’s set a new standard of excellence together.

Ps. This is the guide we created for our SDRs and SDR Managers.
Section 01 / Sequence Style

Sequence Style

Context is king, so before you start writing an email, you need to consider the context of the sequence.

Is this a fully automated email sequence, somewhat personalized, or bespoke?

Determining your style is not a fashion choice. It is a decision between efficiency and effectiveness.
Section 01 / Sequence Style

The tradeoff: speed vs. conversion.

It requires considering your desired cost to acquire a customer (CAC), the size of your market, and deciding whether to optimize for speed or conversion rate.

The determining factor here is how much time I want an SDR to invest in attempting to convert a single account.

If you choose a volume approach, you’ll be able to reach many prospects very quickly with a relatively small team.

Section 01 / Sequence Style

Account-based costs more, but converts better.

On the other end of the spectrum, approaching the same market with an Account Based Style will deliver a much higher conversion rate.

But it requires a more experienced SDR, more supporting resources, ABM campaigns, tooling, training, and will cost more.

Use this math for each hypothesis to determine what sales development approach will give you the results you’re looking for.
Section 01 / Style Progression

Match sequence style to ACV.

As deal size increases, the economics usually justify more personalization, more account research, and more time invested per account.

Volume
Personalization
at Scale
Individual
Personalization
Account-
Based
$5–10k ACV
$10–25k ACV
$25–100k ACV
$100k+ ACV
Section 01 / Four Styles

Four core approaches.

For simplicity’s sake, we have segmented the types of approaches into four styles.

  • Volume
  • Personalization at scale
  • Individual personalization
  • Account-based

Your outreach can exist on a sliding scale between the buckets. You also don’t have to commit to just one style at a time.

Section 01 / List vs. Account-Based

Preface to the styles: List vs. Account-Based

We see a lot of variety in SDRs working Lists vs. being given a list of Accounts, and there is no right or wrong answer.

List-based is faster to implement, but Account-Based will have a better conversion rate.

You can decide which is right for you now and can always change later.

Section 01 / List-Based

List-Based

Many new sales development teams start with List-Based and then transition to Account-Based when they have more than a few reps.

A List-Based approach is any method of list building where you are not starting with a given set of accounts.

This approach is best for large, wide-open markets, and quotas will be higher.
Section 01 / Account-Based

Account-Based

With account-based workflows, leadership decides “the list” of accounts representing your TAM and assigns an SDR a subset of them to work.

The SDR is then given the flexibility to find the best way into the organization.

This approach is best for companies with smaller markets and larger deal sizes because conversion rate will be the most important metric.
Section 02 / Volume

Volume

The volume style is all about bang for your buck.

You want to spend as little to generate as many opportunities as possible.

You must leverage technology as much as possible to scale your outreach.

Channel(s): either 100% email or 100% phone.
Section 02 / Personalization at Scale

Personalization at Scale

This style is all about leveraging targeting to make generally written messaging seem like it was written specifically for one person.

When niching down, ask yourself: how does the context my buyer lives in change when I change one of these variables?

A common example is geography. Does a VP of Sales from SF have different demand gen needs from one in LA?

Section 02 / Personalization at Scale

Context makes generic messaging feel specific.

SF is the world’s startup capital. It has the shortest average tenure of an SDR and the highest average cost of an SDR.

Incorporating this context is a great way to write messaging you can send to a small group of prospects that will feel like it was written just for them.

Channels(s): Email, phone, and social. Phone is a non-blocking activity geared toward calling on prospects engaged with your email.
Section 02 / Individual Personalization

Individual Personalization

This is when you’re researching and writing at least one piece of custom messaging for each prospect.

A general rule is that 20% of your email copy should be personalized.

You might do this for every email you send or just for your first email.

Channel(s): A mix of email, phone, and social. Phone is used as a blocking activity and incorporated into the steps of a sequence.
Section 02 / ABM Supported

ABM Supported

This is when you’re getting ABM support from your demand generation organization.

Campaigns are built off of internally created intent data.

Channel(s): Builds on the above styles and incorporates intent data or signals from an ABM campaign as a starting point.
Section 03 / Parts of an Email

1. The Subject Line: Your First Impression

The goal of the subject line is to entice people to open your email.

To achieve this, your subject line and the value proposition in the body of the email need to align perfectly.

Think of your subject line as a movie trailer: it should provide a glimpse of what’s inside.
Section 03 / Subject Line

Personalization beats clickbait.

Personalization can be a powerful tool. Instead of the overused “first name + X” format, strive to understand what the recipient genuinely cares about.

That might mean industry nuances, recent milestones, or challenges they’re grappling with.

Maintain honesty and do not resort to clickbait tactics. They might lead to an initial opening, but they won’t foster trust.

Your subject line should be concise, compelling, and cut straight to the value proposition.
Section 03 / Body Copy

2. The Body Copy: Making the Connection

The body of the email should help recipients understand its relevance to them.

Begin by clearly introducing yourself and the reason for your outreach.

The content should resonate with the recipient, addressing their specific pain points or aspirations.

Highlight how your solution or proposition can be a game-changer for them, helping them navigate challenges or seize new opportunities.

Section 03 / CTA

3. The Call-To-Action: Seal the Deal

The CTA is the culmination of your email, prompting the recipient to take the desired action.

Whether you’re inviting them for a call, urging a response, or directing them to a resource, the CTA should be lucid and unmistakable.

The ideal cold email would seamlessly weave the introduction, relevance, and action into a single sentence. More realistically, aim for 2–3 succinct sentences.
Section 04 / Relevance Style

Relevance

The Relevance style involves sharing insightful content and then probing if the problem discussed is pertinent to the recipient at that moment.

This style draws inspiration from chains of relevance, ensuring that the content resonates with the recipient’s current challenges or aspirations.

V1
We have a <solution> that will accomplish your <goal>. Are you trying to get <job to be done> and facing <obstacle>?
Section 04 / Relevance Templates

Relevance templates

V2
We accomplish your <goal> with a <solution>. Are you trying to <get job to be done> and facing <obstacle>?
V3
We help your <persona> overcome <obstacle> with <solution>. Are you trying to accomplish <goal> by getting <job to be done>?
Section 04 / Relevance Templates

Relevance templates

V4
Are you trying to accomplish <goal> and surprised the thing getting in the way is <obstacle>? We help your <persona> who are trying to <get to be done> with <solution>.
V5
As a {{title}} at {{company}}, are you responsible for MQL creation for your team?
Section 04 / Relevance Extended

V5 extended

As a {{title}} at {{company}}, are you responsible for MQL creation for your team?

We help <your target audience> <list core benefits here>.

Worth a chat?
Section 04 / Referral Style

Referral

The Referral style is laser-focused on individuals adjacent to your primary buyer.

The objective is to get them to refer you to someone else or identify as the person you need to talk to.

Simple
Sorry to bother you, would you mind pointing me in the direction of the person responsible for <outcome> at <company>?
Extra context
For context, we help companies like <customer 1 and 2> with <value prop>.
Section 04 / The Garrison

The Garrison

The Garrison style is all about leading with the benefit and directly inquiring about its relevance.

Simple
As a {{title}} at {{company}}, are you responsible for revenue generation for your team?

We help <your target audience> <list core benefits here>.

Worth a chat?
Section 04 / The Garrison

The Garrison: extra context

As a {{title}} at {{company}}, are you responsible for revenue generation for your team?

We help <your target audience> <list core benefits here>.

Could we <trial/demo offer> to show you how we can help {{Company}} achieve <value proposition 1> and <value proposition 2>?
Section 04 / Hiring Trigger

Hiring Trigger

The Hiring Trigger style operates on the assumption that a prospect, due to their new job role, might be experiencing certain challenges.

Simple
Congrats on the role at {{company}}! With the recent change, how is {{company}} planning on <outcome>?

<list 3 customers> have been able to <outcome they accomplished>.

Worth a chat?
Section 04 / Hiring Trigger

Hiring Trigger: extended

Congrats on the role at {{company}}! With the recent change, how is {{company}} planning on <outcome>?

<list 3 customers> have been able to <outcome they accomplished>.

<insert your company name> allows you to <describe your top value proposition>.

Is that relevant to you right now?
Section 05 / Follow-Up: Extra Context

Follow-Up Style: Extra Context

This email gives the reader some additional context to your first email, making them a good one-two punch.

V1
<customer> reduced their team’s expenses by <x>% after partnering with <Company name>.

We’ve <outcome we’ve accomplished> so <titles> can focus on top-level priorities.

How are you currently navigating these challenges?
Section 05 / Follow-Up: Extra Context

Extra Context: V2

In your role overseeing <customer’s role> are you looking for ways to <customer’s value prop>?

With <company>, you can <value proposition>.

Is that worth a conversation?
Section 05 / Follow-Up: Bumper

Follow-Up Style: Bumper

The aim of this email is to redirect the prospect’s attention to the initial email.

They are brief and add very little to the conversation. Keep these to maximum one per sequence.

The shortest
Thoughts?
2nd shortest
Did you see my last email?
Section 05 / Follow-Up: Bumper

Bumper examples

Emojis!!!
Just checking in again.

Can you give me a thumbs up (👍) or thumbs down (👍) on whether you are interested or not?

🤙
LinkedIn
I sent you an email a few days ago. Just saw your profile on LinkedIn and it reminded me to reach out.

Could I get your feedback on the note below?
Section 05 / Follow-Up: Breakup

Follow-Up Style: Breakup

This is a final attempt to engage with a prospect who has been unresponsive.

The hope is to receive a response when the likelihood of conversion is significantly diminished.

Still a priority?
I reached out about the <job to be done that we solve> to see if <our solution> could be helpful.

Is this a priority?
Final Page / Breakup

End with relevance, not desperation.

I’ll get back to you later

Since I have not heard from you in a while, I am assuming that <service> is not a priority for you right now. It is understandable, and I don’t want to disturb you.

I will get in touch with you in 6 months and see if you like to talk about it.
Insightful question

I heard that your company has launched <new service/product>.

How has the experience been so far? I would be delighted to hear more about it.

Cold email works when every message earns its place: clear context, sharp relevance, and a next step that makes sense.

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